maybe a thing about particles and waves
or wave-particles and the way light works
and moves, the way soulmates’ eyes ignite
from moon dust, the way some ancient god
smiled and blinked, flicked an able wrist
to strew some billion stars across a
darkly barren sky, then asked his goddess
to suspend the amber moon …
its caress so softly lighted, it stirred
the hearts of night-blooming lovers
but surely …
surely the years run like the cheetah and
soon-or-late some hearts quake asunder,
just as surely as moon dust and starlight and
the way a true love fills in the fault lines
© 2013, poem, Jamie Dedes, All rights reserved‘ Photo courtesy of morgueFile
WEDNESDAY WRITING PROMPT
What are you’re thoughts on soulmates? Tells us in prose or poem. If you feel comfortable, leave your work or a link to it in the comments below. All shared work will be featured on this site next Tuesday.
My second response Jamie.
The To And Fro
to and fro the iron
over bedsheets, his shirts,
as she stands three hours
hot poker of pain
in the small of her back,
lists what else to do,
take down window nets,
wash and iron,
vax front room,
lug it upstairs for bedroom,
carpets,
hoover front room,
lug it upstairs for bedroom
carpets,
clean windows inside
to and fro,
to and fro
polish beneath knick knacks
bought on holiday,
to and fro
strip and remake beds,
make his tea,
always meat and two veg
He arrives home and says,
“What have you ever done for me?”
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Wow! Well done. Thanks, Paul!
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Thanks Jamie. Hope all is well? Here is the first response.
. abridged .
she said they were soul mates, with a yorkshire accent.
both much the same. it lasted a while with ups & downs.
the usual.
then it ended.
this is the shorter version.
sbm.
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I like it..
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Here’s my response Jamie:
Fishman
She loves him
though he is water.
Her mam says “When I gift you
a fishes tail it will hurt
every time you use it
to and fro like a wave.
It’ll seem to him
a beckoning.
I’ll give you a tongue.
Every time you sing to him
you’ll drown a little more.
You’ll have each other,
but I’ll lose you.”
Paul Brookes
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🙂 Thanks, Paul!
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Thank you, my friend! I hope all is well in your world.
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