what a morning, good morning
burst of apricot, showering light
drizzling glee, a child’s laughter
if I had to live for just one day
it would be this one, morning-glory
nodding her bright-eyed blue head
and i know, there’s no such thing
no such thing as a death star
there’s only life, over hill and field
shining into windows, on warm grass
Look! the daisies are smiling
and the California poppies are
popping yellow like corn in a pot
the moon was muse last night
today the sun is in love with me
© 2013, poem and photograph, Jamie Dedes, All rights reserved
WEDNESDAY WRITING PROMPT
Tell us in poem or prose what it feels like to be you on your best day. If you are comfortable sharing your work, leave it in the comment section below. If it’s too long, you can leave a link to it. All work will be published here next Tuesday. Enjoy!
Love your post and it brought to mind many things. Here is my response at https://reneejustturtleflight.com/2017/05/29/glistening-bits-of-gold. Be well.
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response 2.
27 May ( another day in paradise )
we walked the stone,
he kept the place special, closed a while,
is open now . as the sky clears
through willow arches, white calves
and butterflies.
he cuts the shrubs, hedges, and rakes the path tidy.
it is arthur’s stone.
sbm.
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Jamie, your poetry is simply fabulous. I wrote about my very best day and I couldn’t get serious. I put it on my blogs before I sent it to you. however I can whip up another by 7 if you would like; i’m writing one or two prompts tonight anyway. got a lot of thinking to do.
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Dan, no rush. I don’t post them until the following Tuesday so you have time to play. Heading your way now.
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as you take the road to Paradise [bold title!]
about half-way there
you come to an inn
which even as inns go is admirable
you go into the garden of it
and see the great trees and the wall
of Box Hill shrouding you all round
it is beautiful enough (in all conscience)
to arrest you without the need of history
or any admixture of pride of place
but as you sit in a seat in the garden
you are sitting where Nelson sat
when he said goodbye to Emma;
if you move a yard or two you will be
where Keats sat biting his pen
thinking out some new line of poem
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Box Hill is in Surrey, England. It is my ‘soul home’.
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I was away last week! This poem is from ‘The Recovery of Wonder’ (2013)
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Wow! And yes we do all have a soul home. Lovely! See it here next week. And you didn’t miss a week, Colin. I had to take sometime away to take care of other responsibilities. Hope all is well in your world. See your work here next week. Thanks for participating.
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Hope all’s well, then.
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Yes!
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Please ignore last message. This is my submission
My Summer Town zoom
Zoom in to gold world,
on green metal celebratory gate
in centre of town between the shops
Look at it’s green metal pictures.
an old pump, miners lamp,
glass bottles, cricket/tennis bats,
canal boat navigates nothing
Rain constellations bus window,
cars backwash tarmac,
droplets break tension ripples natural birdbath.
Squashed plastic blue pen,
empty grey fag packet,
lobbed lottery ticket
middle of road
revelation.
Empty black/red polystyrene
Coke Zero cup circles
street middle black/white fat cat
waddles across road life design.
After nimbus drops
inhale moss
like marine pool kelp
after wave sea breeze fresh glowing Wombwell by the sea.
Pigeons, spuggys
shadow puppetry streets, houses.
Tarmac warm shivers.
Radiant windows flash mirror
passing traffic.
Evening spitting,
growling, flaming,
fluid lads/lasses on heat,
short shirts tempers.
This is the barbecue.
backyard, eye swag silver,
two joy, pica pica purplish-blue
iridescent sheen
wing feather green gloss tail.
On train squeal chatter,
vivid, green, blue, beavers,
cubs, scouts, ventures
anarchy in uniform.
Unshaven bald man,
open green raincoat,
brown leather shoes,
hauls local paper
packed lime green trolley.
Old folk bench gab,
mothers stroll babies
down funeral paths
eye gambolling squirrel,
cemetery a parkland.
Blackbird gob skyward
atop Victorian six pointed
terracotta Crown top
chimney pot
trills red brick streets
bright yellow sharp
edged box hedge sun
cracked pavements
yellow metal skip
blocks alleyway
All sun snogged
Bright cemetery leaves
behind dark,
bakers window 6 loaves,
one burnt,
nurse boards bus,
‘I was miles away’
Sunstruck leaf bunch
drips bright molten
green glass, other leaves
luminescent silver stars
in green matter, shade cut.
Patient silver hubcap
rests under stone cemetery wall
behind blue bus stop halo,
full moon fall: day waits.
Shadows pass over bus
as if it is stop motion animated.
I get on the animation.
Hand held camera
glare work journey.
Town a small canvas tent
unzipped tied back crowcall,
fragrant grass, earth close,
sun blue. Is on holiday
light quality early noon
than morning, 3 patient
full brown potato bags
by grocers,
cloud dispersal pend
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I love “zoom.” Just that choice of word gives a certain quality to the poem. See it here next week.
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Thankyou Jamie.
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Thanks Jamie. Hope you are ok?
here is one response…..
::these days ::
are longer now, i feel younger now,
i am older. we do so many things.
we are no longer afraid.
make the best of summer days,
winter follows.
he remarked that it was
good enough for the
chelsea flower show.
sbm.
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Am okay. Healing. Thanks for this. It’s true. We are free of a lot of fears. Nicely done, Sonia.
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ah Jamie. I sympathise. I had little dog (s).x
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