… after Clement Clarke Moore’s ‘Twas the Night Before Christmas
‘Twas All Hallows’ Eve, and all through the house
Every creature was stirring, even our pet mouse
Oh the pumpkins were carved with very great care
In the hope that trick-or-treaters soon would be there
The children were agitated, not one in her bed
As visions of sweet treats danced in their heads
Dad and I in our costumes and me with my cap
Had settled by the door listening for the first rap
When out on the lawn there arose such a clatter
We sprang to our feet to check on the matter
We threw open our door to offer sweet stash
While witches flew by, all glitter and flash
And the moon on the rise and the dark ground below
Gave lustre and bluster to ghosts on the go
And what to our startled eyes should appear,
But a miniature ballerina among goblins, one bear
Now, Alice! Now Ernie! Now Jimmy! Now Chris!
Come little Tony, big Brandy and Trish
To the top of the stairs, don’t any one fall …
Now dash away, dash away, dash away all
©2010, poem and photograph, Jamie Dedes, All rights reserved
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Hope I am under the wire Jamie. I have read your poem in the past and love it more each time. Please read mine at https://reneejustturtleflight.com/2017/10/30/goblins-witches-ghouls. I am trying to get my piece of art to post with it but having a bit of technical difficulty at present. Be well.
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My first response Jamie :
#Addiction on Halloween #
It was the time of coming winter after fall
And she came from a ball
It was a Halloween evening
She loved and groped that Eve harmonizing
It was the time for feast
She loved the spirit though came from the east
It was the time for fun
She wore gleaming costumes with a bun
It was the time to unfold new spirit
The air blowing felt different autumn waved and heart enlightened bright
It was the eve when the pall between worlds was sleazy
And to rhyme melodies of worlds was so easy
It was the time to taste candy
She relished its flavour with a brandy
It was the time to sense eerieness lurking around the corner
And the eastern country girl addicted to all unknown being just a learner .
©Kakali Das Ghosh
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I enjoy all halloween poems usually. This was so fun. I can not think of a fall celebration in particular but if I do , I will come back 🙂
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I hope you do! 🙂
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there’s something about a bonfire
that compels you: perhaps it’s the flames
that leap and curl (free engulfing spirits)
or lick gently at the dead waste
calming to eat away at the centre of things
throughout the empty night
perhaps it’s the isolation –
you and Fire alone in the dark night
in which reflecting fires hang forever
perhaps it’s purification –
sterilisation of assembled dross… its reduction
to a usable commodity associated with
the neat feeling of arranging a garden
in the midst of the wilderness
perhaps it’s like death – convenient
tidy cleansing eradicating…
my father knew what he was doing ordering
‘No Mourners’: if they’d been there
it would have been attenuated
hypocritical unholy
fire is none of these things
(1971/72 revised 1982 revised 1992)
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Wonderful after poem. May I suggest a little change on line 6?
The children were agitated, not one in her bed
As visions of sweet treats danced in each head
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Jamie a second response….
.. then there is halloween..
tomorrow.
not on saturday although that may be
more convenient. all hallows,
the reading of the dead.
names.
dust. just
names .
we made the pumpkin again, it comes easier with practice.
he came to tell me about the new baby and said boo . dinner
burned.
the names of the dead
are read.
sbm.
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https://josephshawsite.wordpress.com/2017/09/14/autumnal-2/
” Rainbow hues turning
chill air low sun (but) warm hearts
beauteous day-long dawn
pink light (on) timeless trees
yield a golden fleece and warmth
(for) aching Mother Earth
sleeping beauties wake
from enduring frozen night
in Spring refreshing ”
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Lovely. Do you supposed I can post it next Tuesday?
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Yes of course, Jamie, if you think it’s appropriate. ‘Twould be nice if you could include the link to Joe’s blog about the piece and thus its first performance. The words are obviously mine, the music Joe’s.
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You got it. Thanks! I’m sure everyone will enjoy!
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I really enjoyed your variation on The Night Before Christmas, Jamie. It is close enough in its rhythm and sentiment to retain the charm of the original, but it cleverly captures the essence of All Hallows’ at the same time. Great job.
Meanwhile, I confess that l’m not a great fan of Halloween, the cynical old goat that I am. Too much commercialism. I can however offer a seasonal look at this time of year, with the lyric of the piece Joe wrote for Jenny Whittaker to perform … link will follow
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I acttually prefer celebrating All Souls Day, which allows me to honor those who have gone before me. I wrote this one for the elders in my building who were trying to celebrate Halloween in the way they remembered. Thanks for the feedback and upcoming link. Lovely, John!
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I’m with you in that preference, Jamie. Interestingly, Fox Valley Voices, chamber choir, will be singing a John Rutter’s Requiem on 3rd November, which is a fitting way to commemorate All Souls Day.
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Hi Jamie,
My first response:
Time Fetches
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Received English version
Watch yourself as it’ll soon be time
that the tall hawthorn hedge
that bars you from other worlds
becomes thin this season
in it’s cloud ghosted ditch
so folk from the other side
can bleed through to ours
and you’ll see these weird folk
walk outside your door.
Burn a candle in your home
and light lanterns, jack o’lanterns,
candles outdoors to show
the weird folk, spirits and all
the direct way back. We don’t
want them to detour where
they are not welcome. Respect them
and they’ll respect you.
This night light a fire
in your hearth
to protect yourself
or better yourself.
Write on a scrap a paper
a part of your life
that you wish to be rid off,
such as anger, a baneful habit,
misplaced feelings, disease.
Throw it in the flame
so you may lose
that part you’re ashamed of
Yorkshire Dialect version
Watch thee sen as time fetches on
as tall hawthorn hedge that bars
tha from t’other worlds
in its cloud ghosted ditch
gets thin this season so as folk
from other side can fetch them
sens over an bleed through to ours
and tha’ll see these weird folk
take a stride outside thee door.
Blaze a candle in tha home
and set a flicker lanterns, jack o’lanterns,
candles outdoors to show
the weird folk, spirits and all
direct way back to where
they bide from, so as they don’t
detour where they’re not welcome.
Respect them, they’ll respect thee.
This night light a fire
in tha hearth
for to protect thee sen
or better thee sen.
Scribe on a scrap a paper
a part of thee life
tha wish to be rid on
anger, a baneful habit,
misplaced feelings, disease.
Lob it int flame
so tha may lose
that part tha ashamed on.
This Samhain, All Hallows Eve
place on your table a skull,
small animal skeletons
of shrews, mice, rats disgorged by
forest owls. Lay your gravestone
rubbings as welcome placemats.
Down the centre carved pumpkins,
squash, carrots, swede amongst pine nuts,
walnuts and berries, and dark
breads, rye, pumpernickel, dried
yellow, red leaves, open fir cones.
Fill a cornucopia
with abundant fruit, apples, pears,
leeks. Fill each cup with apple cider,
sweet wine, or honey mead.
Light all with fragrant candles,
to flicker over the plenty.
The table is a thankyou,
a blessing on the goodness.
Go outside, collect dead plants,
to twist and turn and mold a man
or woman to bring inside,
and place on the table.
Give thanks to them and your dead
ancestors before you eat.
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Thanks Jamie. response
.there is a day.
when i listen to cowboy films
on the radio, carve the pumpkin,
breath held in case they scalp him.
every year the same, festival stress
reduced by wanton knowledge
that none of it matters, that I can achieve,
that maybe even I could be worthy, the same
as you.
a surprise party after,
no one came,
no surprise, no one invited,
only you.
sbm.
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