have you noticed the many qualities of the night,
the way it can inspire a sudden sense of fantasy,
coming on to you like a dandy, cheeky and strutting
it temps you to pluck its gaudy sequins and string
them into garland or maybe take its hand to skate
across the glass moon or to twirl on the lunatic edge
and the cusp of intuition: oh! the depth of knowing
the night winds leave you breathless; and have you
seen how quiet meditations on midnight hues illuminate
the book of your life like the gold and jewel colors
of a medieval manuscript, moving you page by page
with the fluid movement of an arabesque or the sweet
heat of a lover’s fingers sketching secrets on your heart,
sharing messages like old souls tend to do; then,
in a sudden burst of starlight, you understand
your story, your sunburned days, your hours steeped
in night visions when the questions are answered and
you know why: why the glass moon is sky crazy,
why the distant stars are radiant, and why you are you
© 2017 Jamie Dedes, All rights reserved
a poem from around 2013, rewritten
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Thanks for sharing Jamie – the solitude of the night really inspires creativity. I have a poetry blog here on WordPress in case you have time to look? Have a good weekend, Sam 🙂
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Beautiful Jamie! The night many times a gift to the muse.
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Reminds me of Pablo Neruda and I love his work.
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Oh, such a kindness to say that. He is certainly one of my faves too. Thank you!
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A wonderful poem Jamie.
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Thank you so much for taking the time to say so.
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Hi Jamie, beautiful and refreshing. Thank you, so lovely to begin a day with the mystery of the beauty that lives in these verses. x
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Thank you, Serena. So kind. You have a lovely day.
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Reblogged this on reubenwoolley.
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Sweet! Thank you, Rueben.
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“of a medieval manuscript, moving you page by page” I was enjoying the play of sounds, reflections and thought. Wake up an association. I simply refrain from the poetic response.
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Please feel free. I love it. We should put our heads together and collaborate on a post – “Call and Response in Poetry” … a thing of our own making. What do you think?
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Jamiе, I admire your vision and concept! But it seems that most authors prefer the comments. And we remain lonely.
Olive Oil
Can I make love with you
calmly like a waterfall,
a moon wrought in live coals
between the palms of Gypsies.
Moon – in my bed
the olives are blooming.
And behind the door – a shadow.
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Wonderful poetry! Lovely! So I guess that’s a no on a post. That’s okay! 🙂 You have a great day, bogan. 🙂
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Beautiful. That’s a lovely poem 🙂
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Thank you for taking the time to read and to gift me a lovely comment.
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