“The Bride Wore Yellow” and “Heart Under Lock and Key”, two poems . . . and this week’s Wednesday Writing Prompt

 

 

“…weddings are giant Rorschach tests onto which everyone around you projects their fears, fantasies, and expectations — many of which they’ve been cultivating since the day you were born.” Susan Jane Gilman, New York Times Best Selling Author. She went to Stuyvesant High School on Chambers Street in Manhattan where Frank McCourt was her English teacher and a mentor.



after Ann’s wedding

yellow, like it highlights the flames of autumn
and sparks cornfields and the California hills,
the oranges and ruddy browns of some cats,
the sunrise at springtime, a harvest moon,
jack-o’-lanterns on Halloween and daffodils

yellow, like her accidental wedding, unplanned
but so perfect, subtle yet somehow spicy nice,
symbol of joy and delight, fourth chakra powers,
way of summer hugs and roses saying goodbye,
honest, you know, not like a silly tale told in white

Originally published in Bay Area Poet Ann Emerson’s online Wedding Album. Ann was married from her hospital bed just two days before she died. A sad but beautiful story. The complete back story and samples of her poetry are HERE.

© 2013, Jamie Dedes, All rights reserved


I wait until I hear a gate latch lift
the turn of key in lock.
I sit amongst toys and unwashed clothes,
I sit and she fingers the beads until you speak
in a voice that no longer seems familiar, only strange.
I turn as our child tugs at the string.
I hear a snap and a sound like falling rain.
The Albatross, Kate Bass, The Pasta Maker
I really wanted
to speak to you of this:
the love I had wild
and so long ago
Now it’s dry,
a land parched
by drought
.
Once a love moist
as a spring rain,
delicate as snow drops,
prolific as a poet
I gave you my love
a tender thing
.
A well-written poem
on twenty-pound linen
You tossed love back
wrinkled and torn,
nicotine stained,
smelling of whiskey
.
I handed you love
on our white wedding day
when you kept your heart
under lock and key
Your eyes wouldn’t
seek mine at the rail
.
I gave my love to you
in the palms of our child
You brushed his sweet face
and flew on your way
You lost yourself in a
the land of golden girls
.
Now, I too keep my heart
safe under lock and key
Heavy the lock is
closed so tight with rust
No hope in sight
No hope wanted
© 2010, Jamie Dedes

“Jamie, I was touched that you used my poem as a starting point for one of your own. I liked your imagery, particularly the love in the palms of a child, and it is good to see that you touched others too.

“The time when you have young children is a very difficult time in any relationship, however strong it is. This was one of a series I wrote to try and document the complex mixture of emotions: love, hate, despair, hope, frustration and fulfilment, that new parents feel regardless of whether their relationship survives or not.” Kate Bass


 

WEDNESDAY WRITING PROMPT

As with all human institutions and traditions, weddings and marriages can be very mixed things. Share your poem/s on weddings or marriage in the comments section below or leave a link to it/them.

All poems on theme are published on the following Tuesday. Please do NOT email your poem to me or leave it on Facebook. If you do it’s likely I’ll miss it or not see it in time.

IF this is your first time joining us for The Poet by Day, Wednesday Writing Prompt, please send a brief bio and photo to me at thepoetbyday@gmail.com to introduce yourself to the community … and to me :-). These are partnered with your poem/s on first publication.

PLEASE send the bio ONLY if you are with us on this for the first time AND only if you have posted a poem (or a link to one of yours) on theme in the comments section below.  

Deadline:  Monday, November 5 by 8 p.m. Pacific.

Anyone may take part Wednesday Writing Prompt, no matter the status of your career: novice, emerging or pro.  It’s about exercising the poetic muscle, showcasing your work, and getting to know other poets who might be new to you. This is a discerning non-judgemental place to connect.


ABOUT

Poet and writer, I was once columnist and the associate editor of a regional employment publication. Currently I run this site, The Poet by Day, an information hub for poets and writers. I am the managing editor of The BeZine published by The Bardo Group Beguines (originally The Bardo Group), a virtual arts collective I founded.  I am a weekly contributor to Beguine Again, a site showcasing spiritual writers.

My work is featured in a variety of publications and on sites, including: Levure littéraure, Ramingo’s PorchVita Brevis Literature,Compass Rose, Connotation Press, The River Journal, The Bar None GroupSalamander CoveSecond LightI Am Not a Silent PoetMeta / Phor(e) /Play, and California Woman

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9 Comments on ““The Bride Wore Yellow” and “Heart Under Lock and Key”, two poems . . . and this week’s Wednesday Writing Prompt

  1. aged wine…
    the couple renew
    their vows

    – Billy Antonio
    Laoac, Pangasinan, Philippines

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  2. Please and thank you!

    At Sea

    He’d be my anchor
    to hold me steady
    He’d be my rudder
    when I was ready
    to be steered
    and grasped
    for journey’s maps

    it sounded safer
    to have such care
    for when in life
    I had been scared
    of life, of me
    looking past
    the shorelines vast

    but years stretched
    the anchor weighed
    life down and rudder
    circled / stayed
    in place, close in
    to that land
    of crystal sand

    the winds were strong
    to fuel the past
    I cut the rope
    on sail at last
    no longer held
    by ancient dreams
    new horizons gleam

    I can never know
    what would have been
    or even now will be
    but let it in
    my own accord
    a path ahead
    explore unled

    Night is coming
    undenied
    and I am crossed
    to the other side
    through opened door
    my skiff and me
    unmoored and free.

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  3. TANDEM: A word that only lovers
    understand.
    MARRIAGE: A state where tandem
    should be true.
    DESIRE: A thing that marriage
    should but will.
    Would that tandem were the way,
    And put marriages at bay,
    Let Lovers have their say……….

    -J.E.Goldie-

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  4. ..cypher spoken clear..

    passed over by accident, the
    thing occured naturally,
    without clerics. without beatitude.

    given by friendship, yet
    piety slowly eroded.

    they come now with learning,
    holding large words, a different language.

    the charm now gone,
    perhaps they did not need it any more.

    once again, it is said, that,
    they speak latin. made
    the word bleed.

    sbm.

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  5. ..spoon..

    it is an ancient place,
    oswald’s tree, the floor
    bends, polished wood.

    there was a wedding yesterday,
    all kilted, the groom ate pie,
    wore proper shoes with segs.

    she showed me a cabinet, a spoon,
    hand forged, old, beaten for sale.

    i was travelling, a pretty
    place, not good enough for some.

    the bottle is crooked,

    we left it
    so.

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  6. veil required

    the groom-to-be
    would just not be
    dissuaded:
    he had to have
    a bride who had
    a veil.

    and thus and sewn
    a veil was grown;
    it shaded
    his beauty’s face
    her Wordless Grace
    so pale.

    all words were said.
    she raised her head
    he lifted
    the nylon net
    revealing
    radiant
    joy.
    their loops arrived,
    and, uncontrived
    and gifted,
    that mellow Kiss–
    that This–
    was Girl
    and
    Boy.

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