“Petrichor (/ˈpɛtrɪkɔːr/) is the earthy scent produced when rain falls on dry soil. The word is constructed from Greek petra (πέτρα), meaning “stone”, and īchōr (ἰχώρ), the fluid that flows in the veins of the gods in Greek mythology.” Wikipedia … we have John Anstie (My Poetry Library) and friends to thank for an introduction to this word: “Petrichor Rising” and How the Twitterverse Birthed Friendships that in turn birthed a poetry collection
evening rain patters about, plays the
rooftop like a kettle drum, taps a code
on window panes, spills itself and
the scent of petrichor rises from
mud puddles and rain-carved rills
sly stars caper in a game of hide and
seek, shy clouds spoon in the smoky
quartz of a subdued moon, a late
dawn will rise in subtile pewter light
Oh!
how they steal our sleep
these, the beloved nights
so rich in comforting blisses
© 2019, Jamie Dedes; photograph, U.S. Department of Agriculture, public domain
WEDNESDAY WRITING PROMPT
The challenge this week is to write about the emotions rain engenders in you. For me it’s joy (and perfect weather for writing), although I’ve never experienced rain to the point of flooding and I don’t have rheumatoid arthritis as so many of my friends do, so no pain or anger. For some people rain is depressing. How about you? Tell us in your own poetry.
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Hello Jamie! I did not see my ping back so I am posting my link:
https://iidorun.wordpress.com/2019/05/28/rain-a-sei-shonagon-style-list-poem/
Hope you are doing well this week. This was another great prompt! The responses are amazing…💐
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Dear Jamie it’s now almost a week since I last posted here. It has been pouring rain. The wonderful part of it, is the trees. They are all laden with buds and bloom. The air smells fresh and the grass is lush and green. My thoughts still wander. Others have created joyful and beautiful words. My little attempt at Haiku I leave to you, It’s not exactly inspiring, so as I said I’ll leave it to you to decide.
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https://starlightandmoonbeamsdotblog.wordpress.com/2019/05/27/a-promenade-through-sadness/
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Hi Jamie, Lots of good responses here and I am adding mine this week. Hope you are well.
Turtle Rainstick
The tall piece of bamboo sets in the corner
as though keeping the walls from colliding
with the aboriginal turtle in mustard yellow hues
keeping a silent vigil, a respite, as the rain
signals a force of nature outside my window
I am reminded that I am a creature of water
my molecular being silent within a human shell
the wonder of a million droplets from a cloud
forming a single raindrop is mind boggling
as they gather in rhythmic action
creating puddles, streams, rivers, waterfalls
cascading exponentially into vast oceans
a home for other water beings living
within a life-giving force
and I listen in amazement at the symphony
that brings life to the earth I live on
where brilliant colors of flowers bloom
in gardens tended and meadows flourish
on mountains
replete with nature’s abundance of creatures
beasts walking the land and flocks of birds
taking flight tenured with bird song
am I not enraptured to know my heart
still beats within its fluidic capsule embrace
of the water that holds me ensconced
in safe keeping
that when the rain thus ceases its’ melodic sounds
the bamboo stick awaits but my touch
yearning to recreate rain’s wondrous music
the timeless aboriginal turtle
warm beneath my hand
© May 2019 Renee Espriu
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Hi Jamie,
Pickatree Rainbird
And the Boss said to all the birds,
“Excavate all the hollows,
release water to make
seas, rivers and pools.”
All obeyed, except Pickatree.
who sat still, would not move,
or flitted between branches.
“It is dirty work. I can’t
soil this bright golden coat,
or silver shine of my legs.”
And the Boss replied,
“If that’s the case, from now on,
your coat is sooty black,
you’ll sup only rain,
and your yaffles only heard
afore downpours.”
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Hi Jamie,
another response:
Pickatree Rainbird
And the Boss orders all his birds,
“Excavate all the hollows,
release water to make
seas, rivers and pools.”
All obey, except Pickatree.
who sits still, does not move,
or flits between branches.
“It is dirty work. I can’t
soil this bright golden coat,
or silver shine of my legs.”
And the Boss replies,
“If that’s the case, from now on,
your coat is sooty black,
you’ll sup only rain,
and your yaffles only heard
afore downpours.”
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beyond
sundays
in rains
forgotten odor
and those ingrown dreams
about
her arm
sundays in rains
like a farewell
beyond
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Responses like raindrops.
Before the Storm
the baptisms begin
across all beliefs
all nations
first in drops
across the tops
of heads
then gentle pour
until
full immersion
bringing hope
and life
once more
to the dry
and weary.
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I love your joyful rain poem, Jamie. Rain makes me feel good too. Here’s one poem.
When The Rain Falls Overnight
Perhaps that’s why
I whisper
“all shall be well”
as a grey day
shuffles to its end
and I rest my head
on the pillow,
close heavy eyes.
Perhaps that’s why
I sleep
so tranquilly,
my dreams lullabied
by clouds uncurling
and spilling
and bathing the stubble
of new-mown grass.
Perhaps that’s why
I wake,
stretch and smile
at the sheen
of wet roof tops
where summer rain
has pattered down
left footprints in the dark.
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suspense
when you fly through rain in an airplane the rain does not fall. it is horizontal. and if each drop could contain a human soul, from any place or time in history, most of the drops would be human-soulless.
but every raindrop has an aspect. if your lower legs are bare, and an early sprinkle splashes against your calf, it talks to you at the moment it ceases to be rain. it encounters you unignorably.
if you ingest a quantum of “magic mushrooms” and then run in t-shirt and shorts barefoot on a sidewalk through cool summer rain, you seem to form thousands of relationships.
that is all for now unless another headcloud bursts.
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https://poeticoceans.wordpress.com/2019/05/23/for-g-jamie-dedes-the-poet-by-day-wednesday-writing-prompt-rain-when-the-clouds-go-by/
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Hi Jamie, Here’s my response to the prompt.My first time here. Thank you.
Petrichor
The parched earth, fissures formed designs
on the burnt umber landscape. Seeds dying
of thirst, the harsh wind sweeping the dust over
skinny cattle, goats that foraged on scrub.
The rattle of the thunderstorm, the beauty
of the threatening molten sky, leaden with
moisture as the drops fall one by one, cool
on the skein of a leaf. The shiver of excitement as
petrichor arose, the olfactory senses heightened.
Hope for new life as the tiny rivulets traced new
patterns, muddy-brown wet lines. In a few days
sprouting seedlings, the circle of life begins.
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Thank you Jamie.
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.it rained in the night.
i woke, heard it, yet also saw the yellow moon.
shining through.
rain is noisy on the roof at huws gray,
where we buy slate chippings and talk
of log stores for the winter.
it is made of metal.
at the ironmongers we chat, buy bulbs,
notice the chip shop is for sale, now.
they sell night lights singly, at 20 p each.
it rained on and off all day, while I worked,
then,
it rained in the night.
sbm.
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.the rain.
talk about the weather, talk
about the rain. cosy. we cleaned
arranged the house, until it stopped.
walked out, bare feet, looked down
felt the wet slate, watched the snails.
damped our hair, to rearrange on entry
into the cleaner rooms. yet no matter
how hard we work, there are still
cobwebs.
sbm.
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.rain comes lightly.
watch, windows speck. days come lightly.
heavy hearts at leaving here. we remember
you. some times.
with difficulty.
some times.
the sun shines,
some times it rains.
sometimes it looks calm when we can feel the wind.
lightly.
sbm.
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with love and blessings from LA thanks for the opportunity
https://wordslessspoken781842219.blog/2019/05/23/nocturna/
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Hi Jamie,
Here’s my second response:
Rain Is Awake
when it falls
hits the snuggled earth
with wet caresses
Conscious movement
rippled determination
to move forward
once a route is found,
knows it must find rest
a place to sleep
but other droplets insist
on movement forward
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Hi Jamie,
Here’s my first response:
Particles OF Rain
strike spark off the hill
tumble down charged, fall
an electric river.
Captured photon tracks
dot glass, world atom
accelerator.
Lost particles,
paper thin blanketed
homeless huddle
in doorways.
Tiny explosions
of heaven’s tears
across the nailed lake.
Day ends as fishermen
fold up their green chairs
by a splashed evening lake
glowered, puddled.
Navigate By Rain
gobbets in motion,
their rhythmic fall and beat,
every drop a note,
on pavement,
tarmac, wood,
tile, hollow metal,
close your eyes,
listen to the music,
varied semitones,
blind, you navigate
by the landscape
described by percussion.
Can you hear her contours,
tell the leather, lace
and cloth she wears
by arrangement of sound
in the downpour?
A time when you don’t
want the rain to stop
until you can inhale
her sweet fragrance.
And open your eyes.
shadow breathes
see how your shadow moves
across the arc of her arm
your shadow breathes to kiss
away the cold up to her neck
across the cool leather couch
she lounges on to reveal more
of her thighs than is sane
for the blood pump inside you
and your lips press into her neck
and the rise of her breasts through
her little black dress, and thighs
that fall open as you kiss an ear.
A Rosary
of raindroplets down the window glass.
Contemplate the mystery within
each of these splattered dribbles.
Each holds grains, dried sea salt,
dust or smoke ascended skywards from water
or land into swirling eddies of air,
each holds dead cells sloughed,
perhaps by lovers fingers, or
by beasts slouching to Bethlehem,
each holds a prayer for life,
a hymn to its origins, a curse
of flood, a blessing of light.
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Beautiful poem Jamie. I was trying to pick a quote from it but I’d have had to re post it in its entirety. Lovely! I too find the rain inspiring. I’d like to give it a try. We seem to be getting April showers in May here. Thanks for the wonderful prompt. 😊💜
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