dusk has fallen
near bereft of light
much to sorrow for
but not the night
– Jamie Dedes
“I have loved the stars too fondly to be fearful of the night.” Sarah Williams, From The Old Astronomer (To His Pupil)
WEDNESDAY WRITING PROMPT
How do YOU generally receive the night? With joy, reluctance or fear? Do you sleep well or not? Tell us in poem or prose. If you would feel comfortable doing so, please put a link to your response in the comments section below – or, if the work is short enough – just include it there that we might all enjoy it. Responses to Wednesday Writing Prompts are published here on the following Tuesday.
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Bit late! Two haiku…
full moon
through a slatted blind
cuts me into white strips
*
midnight:
the moon’s chimneypot
on the back lawn
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No worries. Smiles here. 👏👍
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Peaceful is your presence
Like losing oneself
In embrace of peace itself
Losing self awareness
for some certain moments
Turning away from worries
Frictions and tensions
That won’t leave wakeful mind.
Who says you invoke only
Fear, terror and darkness.
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Well done, Sharmishtha! So delighted. Will feature next Tuesday unless you object. xo
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Loved the write Jamie and the photo to go with. You can find my response at https://reneejustturtleflight.com/2017/03/31/a-siphon-for-dreams. Thank You!
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🙂 Great!
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nightie night
shutter lids o halfanearth
shadow has your number.
cue the creatures oer your girth
batten down n slumber.
slow the breathing ebb the sway
as the starscapes twinkle
and the dreams come out to play
and the brows unwrinkle.
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👍👌😊
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Hi Jamie, my submission this week is called
Tbe Elephantquake
Elephantquake bossed a vast forest.
no rain, all lakes, tanks, ponds,
water holes arid. It thirsts
It searched for water.
It knows of a hidden lake
always full and goes there
to save itself. After five nights
it revelled and splashed in the lake.
Daily it marched upon moonhares,
maimed and wounded them,
on its route to the lake.
One day moonhares met
to save themselves
from the elephantquake
Some said “Abandon this place.”
Others “It’s our ancient home.
Let’s find an alternative.
Let’s see if we can scare off
rampage of elephantquake.”
Some of them said, “We know
of a trick that works
with elephantquake.
we need a sharp person.
A moonhare has a message
for elephantquake. It says
“I come from Moon who doesn’t
want you supping lake as bound
there you kills and maim hundreds
of hares. Lake is forbidden.
Return to your forest home.
“But where’s this Moon, your home? asks
elephantquake “In this lake.
It consoles the survivors
of your rampage.” “Then, let me see him,” requests the elephantquake.
“Come alone with me, I will
show you.” Moonhare takes it one
night to shows Moon’s silvery
reflection in the lake, says
“Here it is, my home, the Moon.
Lost in meditation.
Move quietly, salute it.
Don’t disturb it and bring wrath.”
Elephantquake sees it as real,
salutes it, leaves quietly,
returns to its forest home.
Hares heave sigh in relief.
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Delightful. Thank you! 🙂
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Thanks Jamie. Here is my response this week.
. vanta black .
‘ is dark at night, i lay here looking’
yes
‘ not totally black though,
i like the greys and shadow.
i like when the cars go by,
the lights go across the walls’
yes
‘ i do not think i will like very black,
not vantablack like anish kapoor’
said the bear quietly.
it is alright to say so.
sbm.
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Made me smile. Nice!
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