Illustration courtesy of Frits Ahlefeldt, Public Domain Pictures.net.
“I suspect there will never be a requiem for a dream, simply because it will destroy us before we have the opportunity to mourn its passing.” Hubert Sibley, Jr., Requiem for a Dream
Our scripts poorly written, poems stillborn.
Our music silent. Impoverished souls.
Victims of that
glib dreamscape of Madison Avenue
and Wall Street parvenu, preachers too-
We have lost our muscle and
they have built for us an iron lung.
Using it well, they line their pockets
with the gold of crippled spirits –
While we, the pedestrian heroes of
blue Mondays, stale “Pastor says” Sundays,
and Christmas at the mall, where
manufactured dreams are sold –
we buy-in, shop dead, and
are swallowed whole.
© 2011, Jamie Dedes
WEDNESDAY WRITING PROMPT
In this week’s poems tell us about values gone awry.
Share your poem/s on theme in the comments section below or leave a link to it/them.
All poems on theme are published on the following Tuesday. Please do NOT email your poem to me or leave it on Facebook. If you do it’s likely I’ll miss it or not see it in time.
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ABOUT
Poet and writer, I was once columnist and associate editor of a regional employment publication. I currently run this site, The Poet by Day, an information hub for poets and writers. I am the managing editor of The BeZine published by The Bardo Group Beguines (originally The Bardo Group), a virtual arts collective I founded. I am a weekly contributor to Beguine Again, a site showcasing spiritual writers. My work is featured in a variety of publications and on sites, including: Levure littéraure, Ramingo’s Porch, Vita Brevis Literature,Compass Rose, Connotation Press, The Bar None Group, Salamander Cove, Second Light, I Am Not a Silent Poet, Meta / Phor(e) /Play, and California Woman. My poetry was recently read by Northern California actor Richard Lingua for Poetry Woodshed, Belfast Community Radio. I was featured in a lengthy interview on the Creative Nexus Radio Show where I was dubbed “Poetry Champion.”
The BeZine: Waging the Peace, An Interfaith Exploration featuring Fr. Daniel Sormani, Rev. Benjamin Meyers, and the Venerable Bhikkhu Bodhi among others
“What if our religion was each other. If our practice was our life. If prayer, our words. What if the temple was the Earth. If forests were our church. If holy water–the rivers, lakes, and ocean. What if meditation was our relationships. If the teacher was life. If wisdom was self-knowledge. If love was the center of our being.” Ganga White, teacher and exponent of Yoga and founder of White Lotus, a Yoga center and retreat house in Santa Barbara, CA
“Every pair of eyes facing you has probably experienced something you could not endure.” Lucille Clifton
Hello Jamie! Here is my offering for the prompt this week. A story this time as the sentences became too long…😁
https://iidorun.wordpress.com/2018/12/09/peaceful-goodbye-a-short-story/
I continue to be enlightened with the poets and writings that you share. Thank you! ❤️
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Thank you. Irma, I’m working on Sunday Announcements. When it posts, check out “Room” … think you can/might be interested in responding on their theme.
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Thank you for the heads up! I’ll be sure to check it out.
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Dis=Gusto
What are the lessons mothers taught
when what they said was not for nought
“Family is important, Charlie” was Mrs Manson’s word
“You are what you eat,” is what Jeffrey Dahmer heard
“Find a nice girl,” Ted Bundy’s mom said,
“You’ve got the looks to knock ‘em dead.”
“Don’t play alone”, said Virginia to Billy
Play the her – monica, and watch your willy.”
“Work you body and open up more,”
Mrs.Weinstein said to Harvey as he went out the door
Mrs Crosby said,“Share your Jello, Bill,”
“And accept some help from oblivious Camille.”
“Don’t listen to others’ opinions,” Mary Anne told Donnie
“Your voice trumps them all even when you sound funny.”
So much wisdom distorted, misused
History is only very old news.
So mothers be careful, what comes from your mouth
You never know when it could all go south.
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Oh my! This was a fun read and quite thought provoking! Is it really the mother’s fault though or that men/boys/people tend to hear what they want to hear? Or maybe the one voice of Mother is overshadowed by the numerous voices of society that still champions toxic masculinity? Your rhymes and rhythm are on point!
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HA! more of how anything is rationalized by the “but you told me…” and how anything can – and does – go awry.
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Oh yes…like Mrs. Murphy’s Law! 😂
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Spelling Bee…..
Please spell AWRY.
definition?
: not straight or neat
: not working correctly
: not happening in the expected way
: off the correct or expected course
: in a turned or twisted position or direction
AWRY:a sentence?
“If one or another part of this progression goes awry,
there are sufficient compensating processes
in the average social environment”.
“Because each assumption requires extra tests,
fewer assumptions mean a smaller probability
that the assumptions go awry.”
AWRY: A- W- R- I
WRONG! be seated.
Askew,
aslant,
atilt,
cockeyed,
oblique,
Off-kilter,
uneven.
Disordered,
distorted,
Contorted.
WRONG!
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Thank you Jamie This was difficult for me to post. But as it just flowed out and I looked for quotes I had to. It’s so unlike the way I normally write. I guess it’s AWRY then….
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Change comes quickly
Sweet melodies,
Obsessive love,
Aspirations.
momentary
questions.
all around awry
warnings not taken
deaths, tragedies,
horrors, starvation
clouding our vision,
Peggy Lee singing,
“Is that all there is.”
thoughts
of love and war
cancelling each other
out,
regrets to late
to regret
no time to run.
Its done.
Jen Goldie
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Thank you Jamie. once again I forgot the second “o”………..
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.moving on.
moving on from the last verse of girly looking
after girly, we stopped at the jeweller’s window.
the assistant, neat looked bore & very clean. the
rings were three thousands and more.
enough to take her home and more.
“yes sir you may buy the ring, for a
thousand pounds, or choose to save
her life”
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.clogau.
so we panned the work, stitches.
while before they panned
for gold.
all much the same.
peoples’ values.
sbm.
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Thanks Jamie
.the prize.
the prize came as unexpected
a big building enough to house
the poor, the homeless the dis
possessed. it was tea and
i felt sick
i will rather give the money away
the added value of the food. ritz.
crackers. that bread can cost so much
spread with regular stuff cut thin
the waiter smiled ; i noted his shoes
an honest worker like me
alongside they enjoyed the moment
without the anxiety of my chest where
reparation fails. this is the promise
the outcome of a difficult day
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Thank you! ♥️
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up up and awry
when a man is hacked to pieces
while still alive and
the murder was suborned
by a royal
killer
and small fry are arrested
and the big shot walks
and another big shot says
in effect
attaboy
and the world takes five minutes’
notice
and shrugs–
decency has taken a powder
ethics is in A locked chest in the attic
and kindly is an uncomfortable party guest
who gets hints to leave
from the big boy host
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