i remember …
walking to your gray-stone house
on the crust of snow in March, when the
air was still and soft, reminiscent of pearl,
it was a night of smoked glass that felt like a dream ~
it might have been
the whispers of love…
the sweetest of songs, sung into the ether
while your warm spirit hung on bare trees,
a rose bud expecting summer
awakening to find itself chilled
at dawn in midwinter
the rhythm …
of my heart sundered our paths
i set you free, i followed my joy
down a yellow brick road, looking back
sometimes, but no regrets after all for the
hills and valleys of my solitary adventure
© 2018, poem, Jamie Dedes, All rights reserved; Photo courtesy of MorgueFile
I concur, No regrets!:-)
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It was just so beautiful. I am an aspiring poem writer too. Do visit my page and let me know your reviews.
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beautiful poem
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Serene, thank you for taking the time to read and to leave a lovely comment.
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You write so beautifully
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Lovely poem, a thoughtful lesson of how to make the best of our lives. Yes, live the adventure and show no regrets!
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Sometimes difficult to have regrets but when you can it carries with it a certain kind of freedom.
A beautiful poem Jamie. Hope you are well.
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This is so beautiful, Jamie. I can only sigh after reading it. 😊 I can imagine the emotion and phrases of this poem translating beautifully to voice. 💙
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Imelda, what a sweet and kind thing to say. Thank you.
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You speak of an experience that all, who allow themselves to love and to follow dreams, experience. Sometimes I do feel regret, but not the kind saturated with grief. Maybe it is the regret that I had to give up something for something else even though I know I made the right choice. It would be fun to lead several lives.
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It would indeed, Pat, and you’ve hit the “nail right on the head” with these thoughts. Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to comment. Happy weekend.
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“air was still and soft, reminiscent of pearl” ah that a warm and nice poem that reminded me of this song https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fOCsVRRnLpc
Thank you, Jamie!
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Thank you! Oh, I love Edith Piaf and haven’t listened to “Non, Je ne regrette rien” in years. Lovely!
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Beautiful😊
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Thank you! Happy day …
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😊❤
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Very beautiful 😊💛
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Thank you, Walt!
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You’re very welcome l
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