no mendacity in the natural world, just an
untamed grace in the meditative industry of ants,
in the peaceable company of small creatures
going about the business of food finding
and mating and homemaking in the loam of
this province, the republic of innocence
here is the satisfying beauty of sunrise, of
jacaranda as she paints joy on a blue dawn;
robin with russet-hued breast hunts for worms,
her instinctive motherhood proud of babies
in
the spar and scrap of nest life; it is in this,
the guileless cosmos, that gentle breezes
dance with us on muddy travels down
rocky paths through meadow and brush;
as the flaxen sun shifts from rise to fall,
we pulse with love and fear, soon
we know, clouds will gray with the dark
the golden moon will show craggy depths
sooty with doubt and danger, humanity
projecting its own shadows; still, a certain
trust in nature’s homilies, content in this
province where we’re left to be ourselves, left
to write our wildness on the mirror of time
© 2018, Jamie Dedes, All rights reserved
“How near to good is what is wild.” Henry David Thoreau
WEDNESDAY WRITING PROMPT
Tell us how near to good and honest is that which is untamed in ourselves. Leave your poem or a link to it in the comments section below. All poems shared on theme will be published next Tuesday. You have until Monday 8:30 pm to respond. If it is your first time responding to a writing prompt here, please send a brief bio and photo to thepoetbyday@gmail.com. It will be featured along with your poem/s by way of introduction to readers … and me! 🙂
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Jamie,
Thank you for an intriguing prompt. So many ways one could go with it. Here is my offering.
Lisa Ashley
Untamed
Two dancing white butterflies have no idea
how dark the world is today—
fires and floods, ethnic cleansing,
wars in deserts and in words—
nor the brown spider who just lowered herself
from the red and purple fuchsia blossom
to the green basil glowing in the September sun.
Those lives go on, still, as does mine,
part of a greater web, gossamer threads, tensile strength.
The neighborhood is noisy with construction equipment
moving earth for seven new houses. Seven.
People need a place to live,
though the trees are gone, crashing to earth,
once homes to birds, insects, mosses, squirrels.
And though I’m tucked away in my own private paradise
I know school buses are lining up
to carry young ones home.
We’d go for rides when he was very small
searching for construction equipment so he could name them—
front-end loader, grader, the double-dump. He knew them all.
The big machines, the small boy, the love bursting from my heart,
pink flush on his cheeks when he spied a big scoop,
Mary Ann, Mike Mulligan’s steam shovel, in the flesh.
He turned over rocks on the beach
to touch tiny crabs
before they skittered to safety,
oblivious, like the butterflies and the spider,
of their near-death experience at the hands of a toddler,
or the suffering of the huge world,
still with us these many years.
The apples are turning redder every day.
I made a pot of soup yesterday.
Apples and pears in golden crust,
juices oozing warm cinnamon and ginger breath
to my eager nose, salivating mouth,
hedging my heart against the misery of so many
struggling mightily to survive.
The butterflies dance down the yard,
untamed,
as they must,
lighting my wild love, again.
~Lisa Ashley, February 5, 2018
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Sharing one written this past year. Hope it fits the bill!
Optical Illusions, Dreams, and Delusions
We watch as moon ascends in eastern sky,
a massive disc now peaking over fence—
an optical illusion on the rise,
appearing ever larger to our eyes
than any image captured through a lens.
And what we see and what the mind imprints
border between concrete and surreal;
we tuck away to pull out and reprise,
but should we find delusion has dispensed
we search to understand what was revealed.
Same could be said for all the pain we feel,
whether it is caused by physical distress
or mental anguish covert and disguised—
setting off alarms and raising shields,
then leaving us despondent and depressed.
‘Hope’ rises like the moon in pale nightdress
her whisper carried soft among the stars—
and even earthen mother can surmise
that if trials and tribulations are the test;
then blessings and endowments are our prize.
Ginny Brannan
Or found here on my blog: https://insideoutpoetry.blogspot.com/2017/04/optical-illusions-dreams-and-delusions.html
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Beautiful poem,Jamie,and thanks for the prompt. Here’s my response, I’m enjoying the challenge of writing on more abstract subjects than I do normally!
In the garden with Caius
I follow him across puddles,
his yellow wellies twinkling.
He climbs onto a tree stump,
points to water-logged grass.
“Now look,Gran,look,
this is the floor,
down,
and this”
-gesturing upwards-
“is the sky.”
He stretches out his arms,
raises them, leaps,
lands and cheers.
“You do it, Gran”
and I do it,
his face
the unruffled lake
where I run
clear as moonlight,
balance perfectly
on damp, sawn wood.
We take turns, root
beneath the garden’s
green memory,
our hands brown leaves
cupping the breath
of early autumn.
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A sort of celebration, albeit one that is a little melancholy … https://poetjanstie.wordpress.com/2018/02/01/moon-child/
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secondly…..
.he wanted a garden.
have you collected seeds of many years, packed, labelled, dated.
have you died, and left the table unprepared. i have them now in boxes, a gift.
from those who love. they will bring me work, joy, an independent air.
seeds need water.
sun stays later.
i have imposter syndrome, never diagnosed yet googled when heard on radio live .
there may be too many additives these days not enough honesty grown.
she said i should have something new in the greenhouse.
i have, i said, and thought of you who
planted the seeds.
sbm
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Thanks Jamie-
first response
::you say such nice things, sir::
one dot.
not two?
you say such nice things sir, while you are one in many,
many
disagree.
some struggle with the work each day, yet carry on, what
else can be done?
working in the field is good & honest.
quiet day with bread, purposeful baking, folding and pleating.
tomorrow is the run of the mill type daily.
as before, this is no metaphor.
where is the self worth sir, when we look full long in the mirror, see
darkly the things of youth, darkly those ideas & happenings not
written of here.
no guardian review.
it has not been the
experience we hoped for. we shall wear pyjamas. the book remains
tied.
sbm.
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Thank you, Jamie for the “rich” poem!
Return to innocence
The hand that caresses the wave.
The mouth that hardly opens –
breathes in the fresh wind of the stone-pines.
To speak to the stars,
to write out signs –
that can be learnt.
It is known by the astrologers, magi,
illusionists, newspapermen.
All this can be learnt.
To be in conformity
with the expectance.
That is the art
of the skilful ones, the thought of the blind men.
People who sing in the boat
that has sailed off, do they know?
Does the sand remember other steps
but those of the children?
The hand that caresses the wave.
The mouth breathes in – the fresh wind
of the stone-pines.
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Oh my heart!
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Hi Jamie,
Here’s my third:
History (A World Where 2)
is only ever now.
Events marked as then
can be dismissed as unreliable
personal testimony.
All records are falsifiable,
vague and without substance.
Numbers and dates are prone
to change with new evidence.
The past is uncertain.
Only the now is trustworthy.
Memories are full of doubt,
false and fake images.
Have faith in the eternal present.
It can’t be held onto.
Whatever can’t be grasped
has our hope, faith and trust.
I love you now. Whatever happened
is subject to conjecture.
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Hi Jamie,
Here’s my second:
The Need
for your inattention.
Don’t compare and copy me.
My life is not an example.
Don’t follow my words.
Don’t try to match your skills
and attitude to mine.
All these sites ask for followers
and likers. My popularity
is not measured in clicks.
A comment is not a vaiidation.
A share is not a support.
You are not mimetic.
Do not find yourself in others.
You’re not hollow.
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Hi Jamie,
Here’s my second:
The Need (A World Where 2)
for your inattention.
Don’t compare and copy me.
My life is not an example.
Don’t follow my words.
Don’t try to match your skills
and attitude to mine.
All these sites ask for followers
and likers. My popularity
is not measured in clicks.
A comment is not a vaiidation.
A share is not a support.
You are not mimetic.
Do not find yourself in others.
You’re not hollow.
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Hi Jamie,
Here is my first response:
Believe
I don’t believe folk who are honest.
I were brought up with lies.
I’m happy with dishonesty.
It’s more real. Tell me porkies.
Elaborate. I take my wife, my kids,
government with a pinch of salt.
If anybody tells you you’re good
You can see their eyes twinkle.
Same if they tell you you’re rubbish.
Tongues forked or straight
wind you up. I smile sweetly
when you say I’m handsome,
talented. Always I say, “O, aye!”
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🙂
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a lion hunt
begins with the hypothesis of lion:
a roar in the night; a boy gone missing
or a bullock; an enormous spoor
in the path where the women walk;
a fur-net caught in the thorn bushes
speculatively examined by the old men
so it is with the pursuit of poetry:
one assumes that there is
something called poetry to be found –
but compared with hunting a lion…
well you can know in advance
what lion will look like
when you catch up with him
while the whole purpose
of the pursuit of poetry us to discover
by running it down just what a poem is
the pursuit must begin more or less
where it hopes to end – with a report
of the rather dubious quarry; if you start
with the wrong report you will end up with
the wrong phoenix or the wrong unicorn –
or whatever the fabulous creature
turns out to be
what one needs is a reliable scout
– somebody who was there at the end and
(against all odds) managed the journey back
– then you become the scout
*
From my ‘Years Later’ (2016)
*
Thoreau is a Good Reliable Scout!
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