“Piglet sidled up to Pooh from behind.
‘Pooh!’ he whispered.
‘Yes, Piglet?’
‘Nothing,’ said Piglet, taking Pooh’s paw. ‘I just wanted to be sure of you.’”
The House at Pooh Corner
Dear Ernie,
I sensed Friday that Time had released you into Eternity,
like a flower releases its perfume to the wind.
Confirmation came this morning.
You’d left, the kindly message said,
at 6:15 a.m,
like a responsible worker off to a new job.
You couldn’t come to the phone, so I sent
a card last Monday …
… to say goodbye.
To say, Ernie ~
You are our Bodhisattva. We’ll never forget.
We’ll never forget:
You walked into our embrace ruffled and teary
and you grew into a saintly calm.
You reminded me of the Summer of Love
with your long hair, your gray beard and mustache.
I had to blur my focus to see you clearly,
to see the ancient sage, the grandpa Bodhisattva,
the motorcycle Buddha,
the wise, funny, accepting not resigned, friend.
In metta,
Jamie
© 2019, poem, Jamie Dedes, All rights reserved; Photo courtesy of Fran Hogan, Public Domain Photographs.net
WEDNESDAY WRITING PROMPT
Write a poem about a friend or about friendship.
Share your poem/s on theme in the comments section below or leave a link to it/them. All poems on theme are published on the first Tuesday following the current Wednesday Writing Prompt. (Please no oddly laid-out poems.)
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PLEASE send the bio ONLY if you are with us on this for the first time AND only if you have posted a poem (or a link to one of yours) on theme in the comments section below.
Deadline: Monday, May 6 by 8 pm Pacific Standard Time.
Anyone may take part Wednesday Writing Prompt, no matter the status of your career: novice, emerging or pro. It’s about exercising the poetic muscle, showcasing your work, and getting to know other poets who might be new to you. This is a discerning non-judgemental place to connect.
You are welcome – encouraged – to share your poems in a language other than English but please accompany it with a translation into English.
A late response from me! Apologies – I fell asleep putting my kids to bed. I wrote this for another prompt but felt it also applied here.
https://iidorun.wordpress.com/2019/05/05/heaven-sent-group-run-a-lai-poem-and-running-update/
No worries if it doesn’t make it in! Hope you’re doing well, Jamie!
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It’s fine. 👏👍💛
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Thank you for being so understanding! ❤️
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No. Thank YOU and everyone else for patience. Just home again from ER. Phew! All is well. Working on the post now. Thanks for coming out to play. xo
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Respected Jamie Ji added urdu translation ..the second link on poetic oceans has somehow broken..you will find the poem on Unsaid Words of Untold Stories.Blog.hopefully
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https://poeticoceans.wordpress.com/2019/05/01/for-honorable-g-jamie-dedes-the-poet-by-day-wednesday-writing-prompt-if-humans-are-friends/urdu translation added
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love, blessings and gratitude from LA
https://wordslessspoken781842219.blog/2019/04/23/sometime-in-an-august/
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So veery sad. (For some reason, I can’t like or comment on your site today. Probably not your issue. Probably something with the way my tech advisor set mine up. I’ll have to look into this.)
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thank you, Jamie. i do miss my friend very much. he is of the ages now and in a far better place 🙂
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This is a simple poem I wrote many years
ago for a true friend I’d known for over 30
years. She has passed now. But I still benefit
from her strength and passing wisdom and
I will never forget her.
For Karen:
You’re bright!
And lovely!
And beautiful!
I will always
Hold that gift
In my heart.
Because,
The warmth
And joy
Your friendship
Has offered
Will stay with
Me,
Forever.
As I said…a simple poem.
But straight from my heart.
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Hi Jamie,
Here’s my third response:
What’s So
special about me
after my mates are gone?
Nobody to talk to.
They left before I could say goodbye.
They bleed and I don’t.
No reason. I went to their leaving.
I can’t hug them.
They are so cold
Wish I could have left.
At the same time.
Wish I could be as cold.
No reason.
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Hi Jamie,
Here’s my fourth response:
I Always Lose
contact with everybody
so find out how they’re invaluable.
Taught at school to make promises
that can’t be kept can’t keep. As is fashion
Lost contact with school mates.
Taught memory makes you responsible
for their anniversaries, forgot
to pay the provider. No internet.
Taught to lose books cos they dont
tell you owt. Libraries are records
of folk losing stuff. What I want
to read that for. Enough on forgetting
my own, our lasses and I swear some
kids are saying am theirn. All in air.
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ROYALTY
For Bryan Southwell
You were the King, upbraided in rehearsal
for taking too long to die. “They’ll all miss
the last bus home if you don’t speed this up!”
Even now, your fury reverberates.
Ah, my gracious friend, so many miles walked
upon the links, everything elegant,
even your bon mots in the midst of our
vulgar chaffing. The Schubert Impromptus
as we drove those Norfolk byways, the sun
flecking the chestnut leaves. The Canterbury
Tales in Melton, shared hours of bawdiness
and helpless laughter. You could have graced those boards
making love to the Wife of Bath and who knows else.
Admissions and discharges, blow
after vicious blow, cries of pain filling
the ward, nothing imagined for effect.
In the end, death could not come soon enough.
You slipped away, into the wings, denying
us all one final curtain call. You were
ready, not us, no, palms uplifted, empty.
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.memoire.
he says it is the word.
they will remember.
i will remember them all,
tidy, kind, white table cloths,
napkins, the favourite
picture.
i will remember you,
work out your age
every year. the wind blows.
all beautiful faces. the friends.
sbm.
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#facebook friends day
so bear says,
why aren’t i in the film,
i am your friend.
ah yes i says,
yet no one will
believe that.
sbm.
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Thanks Jamie.
.friends.
we are friends .
we are friends , we met in the lane.
the words sound like poetry, the quiet
voice sounds shouting in this silence.
it can make windows and opportunities,
space to accompany the music.
travel far and in between, play the right notes,
write notes, and then maybe, all will come
clear. or not.
i need that stop.
sbm.
27.9.14
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Hi Jamie,
Here’s my second response:
My Strangers
are friends who haven’t been estranged yet.
All my mates are strangers.
I keep them at a distance.
Chat to them in third person.
Internet on my mobile tells me
when I’ve to give them best wishes
for a special occasion like anniversaries.
They inspire closeness and loyalty.
I can trust them.
They know me.
What I eat, sup.
laugh at.
Strangers are more intimate than friends.
From my collection “A World Where”, Nixes Mate Press, 2017
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Hi Jamie,
Here’s my first response:
On Female Friends
Both tote cans of lager,
all in black leggings
get the weekly shop in.
One says to the other who
Packs the shop “I’ll stand
on his face. Tell him.
I’ll stamp on his face.”
The next couple,
“Mam, you buy the weirdest.
What’s suet for the birds? Fat balls?”
“It’s your dad’s dinner, pet”
They both laugh.
From my last collection “Please Take Change”, Cyberwit.net, 2018
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